The vocals must have been terrible because the music is quite impressive. Better luck with a better girl.
I found that metronome tick used as percussion in the beginning funny but creative. Funny because it's a little harsh for an intro.
I had some melodies I enjoyed when I sang, but the lyrics are a little too personal to simply publish as such. She was the only one who was supposed to hear it.
But thank you!
I really appreciate it.