Personally, I thought it was quite good throughout.
It definitely fits the title, and is fairly creative to boot! Boy, have standards for the Audio Portal gone up since I first got here!
You really think so? ^^ haha, thanks for the listen! :)
Well, while I did like your piece, especially for the rhythm and the beat and the decisive finish, I can't really get over the repetitive nature. Also it seems especially harsh on the ears at the beginning, and several other times throughout. While I do like the song, I feel like you could improve on some things, but all the same, I quite enjoyed the listen, so thank you for uploading. Good luck and keep up the good work.
Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.