nice lil verse!
It's a shame that some things never see the light of day in the circle.
This sounds like it would have been a dope drop in a cypher.
Onto bigger and better things though.
Looking forward to hearing more from you in the coming weeks Teq!
There are so many punchlines that have already been used that it's not uncommon for rappers to use each other's punches even by accident. I haven't heard it before, but you're right, it does sound a bit generic.
Even so you've got a nice flow.
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