The synth which played throughout the entire track started out nicely, but eventually became a bit overused and repetitive. This clashes with the soothing vibe that you set up. Also, I don't think the violin fit into the song very well. The composition of the violin sounded very nice, but the instrument didn't. (This is my opinion.)
Also the pause at the end is not good.
If this were to be menu music, then you should make it loop fluently. That is what developers want.
I gave you five stars because I can tell you put effort into it.
Thanks so much for the input! the thing about the violin is true :/ sadly, all I have is musescore to work with, and the sound of the violin isnt exactly what i wanted.. lol but its the best ive got with what i have. same goes for the looping--I havent figured out how to loop simply because musescore doesnt give an option like that :O i dont have a program that will let me loop it fluently. any suggestions?
Pleasant to listen to but I will give you the feedback: bring your bass and backing synths up and/or down a few notes each bar. Make sure the lead is not your only melody.
:P thank you! it's funny-in listening to these as I've been posting them, i've thought more about the melody needing to be in more than in just one line :D ha glad to know it was a good thought! also, there isn't really as much i can do with bringing bass and synths up--using musescore is very...limiting. but i will definitely be keeping that in my mind! thank you sooo much for your feedback!
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