Nice melodies on this one m8! :)
You've got lots of really interesting elements in this track - lots of nice layering in the drums and synths, it sounds like a really full track when all the elements are in play. I feel the transition from the buildup to the chorus at around 00:30 could've had much more impact though - I think maybe it needed a bigger change in the rhythm, something to make it feel more intense than the buildup rather than less so. I think the track could also be a bit longer, maybe if it had an extra variation on the melody and rhythm.
Anyway on the whole it sounds great, keep it up :)
your literally the first person to ever comment on my any of my songs so I just wanted to thank you for that.
btw I can't really do much with FL studio demo version... but I'll try my best next time! XD