This is a monster track. Honestly, the only thing holding it back is your vocal equipment, and that's not hard to fix -- I can hear a little rattle going on. Really impressed you took the initial theme, crafted a tight narrative, and weaved a pretty hook. Jabun really took that to the next level, by the way.
You've got a great accent for hiphop and a nice, almost asymmetrical stream-of-thought flow that makes your poetry run like conversation. Does it come natural?
Hmm haven't noticed the rattle myself, good ears! I think my breathing technique needs some practice too, but otherwise you're right, not optimal studio equipment yet. He did take it up a notch, agreed!
Thanks. When inspiration really flows it does sometimes, I think this was one of those, but often it take s bit of practice; polish to get it right. Appreciate the feedback! Guess I'd better really focus on quality recording stuff!
Yo this is really great I really love the beat and the rapping kinda makes me wanna get back into hip hop. :)
Thanks man! :)
TBH I never checked your stuff out. This is the first entry I hear from you, but I gotta say I am surprised of the quality.
Great rapping, lyrics and beat. Nice job. -0.5 because the chorus was slightly off sync, but it's not a biggie. Keep it up man
Thanks man. :)
Woah, it's off sync?! I'm tempted so say you must be having some latency issues, that the browser is causing some lag or something, but hmm, listening again that 'Or' does indeed come in some milisecond late, hope that's the part you're hearing so I'm not totally missing something more major! Thanks for the feedback; will do!
Splendid collab, mate.
Loved this mate :') Feels amazing, I love the simplicity and the energy that boosts the lyrics!
Appreciate it! :)
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