For the most part I liked this song. It's a well-made steampunkish/western sounding song and I can clearly hear some of your inspiration from Twilight Princess' Hidden Villiage. What ruins this song for me, however, is the section from 1:40-2:45 or so. I believe this segment is good and well-composed by its own merit, but it sounds too goofy and light-hearted and clashes horribly with the feeling of the rest of the song. Those 85 seconds of music just sound like wholly out-of-place filler and leave me unable to derive enjoyment from this song. If this song had a better, more thematically fitting transitional segment in place it would be much better.