Great Job On writing this song! I really liked it :P
In the beginning, the strings (i think?) Could use a bit more stacattor.
At around 00:48, they break into long legato strokes, and I think it could use a bit more 'vibrancy'
The xylophone has the right timbre, but the drum beats in the background could be brought out a bit more with slight variations.
Right after that we have the guitar riff that sounds rather nice with the flutes.
Throughout the piece, it might be good to have a defining structure with occuring riffs that you bring back from the beginning, might wanna take a look at a sonata form maybe? :)
IMHO, The ending of the piece needs a climatic build up, imagine a supernova blowing up or a galaxy being born (this is space right? :D).
All in all, it comes down to how you want to portray space, if you think space is Asian, then awesome XD. I liked this one very much! 4/5
lmao thanks man! Those tips are all very helpful. I don't imagine space as Asian...I honestly couldn't come up with a good name so I just made something up. It wasn't my intention to be about a particular subject when I started.
Thanks again :)
i dont have my headphones on but it dosent seem to have much bass . i do like how it sounds vary analog tho melodys are nice wish the kicks had a bit more punch to it o.o
Yeah, this song kind of lacks in bass. I started it a long time ago and got it stuck in my head, so I never could come up with a good bass part.
Thanks for the review :)
Nice piece, I like that "asian-esque" style.
Instruments and lines are great, the only thing this piece needs (in my opinion) it's a moment when the music takes off, something to remark the climatic moment of the music.
*Side note*: when I'm not sure about genre, I usually choose "Fusion".
Thanks for the review! I didn't even realize that NG has a "Fusion" genre :D