I see a lot of potential in this song, better mixing should fix it. Great job on this piece!
Thank you very much!
Pretty good song! Very nice lyrics that express imagery, and the flow of them was real nice. Nothing in that area seemed out of place. Amanda, you have a very nice voice, and you sang very clearly. Yet, you need to work a bit more your notes. In a few places you sound a bit off-key.
Guitar was great, very nicely played.
As for the mixing, the guitar's volume should be turned down just slightly. In about two or three places I couldn't hear Amanda's singing well. Aside from those things, this is good!
She will be glad to know your feedback! I thank you for your feedback too.
It was all brought together really fast, on a ludicrously low budget. Hopefully it'll help inspire you some in your creations and adventures in life :)