you do good work with the pads, violins,strings in your songs man and this one..some nice arps as well, nice ambience and atmosphere to the songs..I guess things like cybal crashes should be louder and have a reverb with longer delay to be more emphasised in the song...and percussion louder also hi hats so quiet.....nice chord progressions etc....check vengeance sample packs electro and house etc for better drum and fx and crash samples etc..add more fx to your song and at transitions more risers/fx for more intenisty
Whoever gave this 1 star is an ass. This is actually pretty interesting. The things that could be done better is the percussion. The kick is not emphasized enough. The percussion in general needs to be a bit more polished. And it could use some better instrumentation in certain areas. Preferably for the beginning. I'd suggest practicing more on your mixing to make it more pleasing to the ear and panning your channels to give the song more atmosphere. Other than that, you did very well. I've taken a look at your other songs and you seem to have a really good ear for melodies and a way with chord progressions. It's amazing really how long you have been making music and the little fans you have to show for it. I'd recommend practicing on the things mentioned and you should most certainly grow as a musician. You have gained a new follower. I look forward to your new tracks. :)
Heh, I've never been good with percussion. Always struggle with it. Same for transitions. It'll take some serious effort to perfect but I'll get it eventually.
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