Havnen't gotten to listen tomuch of your stuff since I followed you, but I quite like this one :). The instrumental was pretty good with good ambient sounds and it has this amazing adventure-ish feeling to it :). I really like the sounding of the piano :).
The lyrics are very deep and very well written. I really like them. The vocals themselves are ok, but I feel like they could have been mixed better into the track. They kinda get drowned in the mix so I can't really hear them as well as I wish I could. You could at least turn up the volume a bit, but it could also use some better eq'ing and mastering as well.
Good track overall, but the vocals weren't up to the task really. The instrumental was very good, but as you didn't make the instrumental I can't really give you points for it I'm afraid.
3 stars. Keep up the good work ;).