The Little Child

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My new song ( The Little Child ) is a true story , happened to my best friend who I used to call him ( Little Child ) coz he's always scared & shy but now & after 8 years , he is my backbone & my protection .

The original beat by ( KtheGreat ) called ( Hope )

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Lyrics :-

Part 1 :-

Once upon the time I used to live alone
Without a brother or a friend , just without a backbone
I said to myself : if I want to survive
I should be clear like the water , patient like a stone

And I still remember that one day
It was 10 PM , 1st of May
When I saw a big truck hitting a little child
I was terrified & I just ran away

I felt so ashamed & I started to cry
I cried a lot until I felt like I'm gonna die
Die ? Yes , I should die . I don't deserve to live
Coz I'm weak , scared , fearful , coward & shy

I looked to the sky , I was waiting for a sign
25 years and my life is not even mine
Shine babe , shine . They thought I'm gonna shine
My body's very old but my brain is only 9

I'm down on my knees & I'm closing my eyes
I'm tired ..... after hearing all the lies
They said I'm dead and now I'm in hell
But no , I only need a customise

Is it about wisdom ? I am very wise
Is it about the level ? Coz I'm about to rise
I'm not scared anymore , I'm just having a rest
I will revenge very soon , just keep calm guys

Part 2 :-

On my bed , it's midnight and my body's getting colder
Trying to stand up .... But I'm just getting older
It's my time to fight against all my fears
So I'm going out with a gun on my shoulder

I'm hoping that I could be what I wanted to be
I'm hoping that I see what I'm not able to see
Do they really think I'm weak or I'm just a good guy
No one can answer this question , It's just up to me

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Havnen't gotten to listen tomuch of your stuff since I followed you, but I quite like this one :). The instrumental was pretty good with good ambient sounds and it has this amazing adventure-ish feeling to it :). I really like the sounding of the piano :).
The lyrics are very deep and very well written. I really like them. The vocals themselves are ok, but I feel like they could have been mixed better into the track. They kinda get drowned in the mix so I can't really hear them as well as I wish I could. You could at least turn up the volume a bit, but it could also use some better eq'ing and mastering as well.

Good track overall, but the vocals weren't up to the task really. The instrumental was very good, but as you didn't make the instrumental I can't really give you points for it I'm afraid.
3 stars. Keep up the good work ;).

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Lead Vocals
Original Creator

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Sep 27, 2014
10:36 PM EDT
File Info
5 MB
3 min 40 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.