If that was your intention, then you hit it spot on... although you could have done some effects to further augment the song itself. Overall I liked it.
tenned and fived.
Definitely going into the library.
kind of repetitive
this seems to be the problem with most audio makers. Repeating the same tunes for almost the whole song aint goign to make the best of music...sorry friend. next time try to improve by not making te same tunes over and over again it really helps if you do.
it is defintely better than some out there so dont get discouraged.no matter what anybody says.