oh maybe this "grunge" style is what i keep writing in my music. i thought i was hooked to "heavy metal". took me forever to understand what you were saying. for example, "nose exist", "roll majest", "no resist" im trying to remember a funny one. oh well.
uh i did like the melody but everyone complains to me that i forget to make the melody catchy so im not so sure about my opinion anymore.
hmm.... i feel like it could use a bass. and some backup. and drums. but that's just me. that wasn't an insult it's just that i think it could include some accompaniment. not that it needs it.