Okay, I'll try to review this to the best of my ability.
I like the intro, it's not too short, yet it's not overbearingly long. I also like how you often used different synth sounds with this. I agree with the below review by LexaHergon, either add in more fills to make the song have differentiation or perhaps making some of the drum tracks have a glitchy loop (making it sound more glitchy would be a cool addition in my opinion, but may not be your style), since after a few seconds, the loop began to sound monotonous. It would be perhaps good for a background song (which may be what you're going for, I don't know) but it would be nice to hear variation if this becomes a full song and not a loop.
Another problem I had was with the looping. The looping on this short loop doesn't agree with me. You have the white noise cancel out (from what I can hear), which makes the looping feel clunky to me. I would make a fade for the white noise trail off in the beginning, to make it feel more continuous, if that makes any sense. If you do make it into a song, however, I wouldn't worry about this much.
All in all, you have a decent track here. I like the vibes of it, and I would like to hear perhaps an extended version.
Good electronic percussion loop.
It has a nice overall sound, It just needs some more details such as fills and rolls once in a while, like the ones in the beginning and the end, that kind of details ca make this track to sound less like a base an more like a full piece.
THAT'S more like it!
Sounds like this would be good for a fighting sequence in an RPG. Remember the game Earthbound for SNES? That's what this reminds me of. Cool man.
A cool beat that i could definitely see being in a stealth see/ spy movie.
Its not something i wold listen to for fun but it could definitely be some badass background music.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.