Great job, i love it.
I just shaved my head to this
Sometimes like I heard about mine life when I read the lyrics and listen to them , I love that work .
As an idea I think is a good composition, but as production... well...
The intro is very long (I have same problem sometimes) and lack dynamics. 1:14 just an intro? that's 1/3 of a normal radio track.
Whole track has very harsh high frequencies but the most obvious is on the voice. The whole voice is fuzzy, harsh, abrasive and I can't really understand any of the lyrics. If you put a distortion on the voice, maybe you should put it in parallel with the voice, as a send effect...? or just on the reverb (voice ->send distortion/ filter/ reverb).
Excellent as always.
Glad you like it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.