Once again, a pretty fine rendition. I'd say to avoid overusing the saw on everything. The bass should have been something different as well. Also for the bell part at 0:22 I would have overlaid an electric guitar or something similar since the bell alone sounds a bit weak for it. Some hi hats would have been fine as well, especially in the 0:40 part where the percussion is mainly just kick and snare. :)
Thanks! I do need to vary my instruments a little more. I have a pad on top of the bell, but it needs something more. And I'll try to sort out my percussion in future.