Nice first submission! I'm surprised this didn't get noticed at all. Kinda like a roller coaster, it'd be a nice piece for a neon-lit roller coaster, that would be really cool : )
-It seemed too glitchy at one part, but I'm not too sure. Keep it up, you're doing very nicely : )
8/10, 5/5 : )
-Check my audio, and especially vote on "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall" if you do, it's a very nice little piece.
Here's a link...