I got found myself very inspired by this peice, quite some time ago when I first came across it and created this: http://123gas321.deviantart.com/art/The-Way-The-Wind-Blows-541646057
Conceptually, I like this peice, but I think it could do with some more detail, some parts feel very stretched out, like the beggining. I also don't understand whats going on in the end with the different ambient sounds and typing.
The peice was nice and diverse amongst styles, remaining calm and generally nice to listen to.
I don't have a massive understanding of music, but it would be awesome to see this peice more refined.
When the harmonica joined the melody it felt way too loud in comparison with the arpeggios on the background that started first. After more and more instruments join the song though, it feels very relaxing, calm. That, until the bruises in the end which feel weird and way too stretched. Overall it's a strange but nice track.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.