This is an NGADM Round 2 Review.
Let me just preface this review with the following: there's no doubt in my mind that you have an overabundance of talent. Mind sharing?
The introduction is wonderful. Just a pleasure to listen to. Your voice remains as the anchor to the song, giving it a soft, melancholic nature. Speaking of melancholy, it seems that this song mostly lies in the 'sad' zone. The translation of the lyrics reflect this I think. The lyrics are beautiful in a subtle way, might I add. Going back to your voice: the control you have over your voice, and your ability to sing in many different languages is impressive. Coupled with your voice, your instrumentation is outstanding. The piano blends well with the strings to create an atmosphere that is undeniably rich. Speaking of the piano, I loved the way you wrote the outro (particularly from 2:30 and on).
For the most part, the mix is spot-on. Though I have to agree with Step about the vocals and overall balance of the instruments! Just be mindful of how your other instruments play out in relation to your voice. For instance, I would have liked to hear a greater focus on the piano and strings, perhaps with extra piano passages thrown in to give the song some extra flavour and emotion.
I'll say it again, you're full of talent. I am eagerly awaiting your next track! :)