This is a very original piece. I can imagine a boss fight or climax happening with this playing.
Everything doesn't sound like it should work but it does. the off beat driving chords I think are great, they give a feeling of uneven uncertainty.
I think the drums could be louder and more complex to really drive this piece. around the 2.20 mark you have a really good driving lead but the drums feel repetitive. it could make the ending alot more interesting if you changed the drums every few bars rather than the formula you have atm.
Otherwise it is a good piece, it kept me interesting to the 4 min mark so great job!
thanks for the review
I got lazy at the ending :P
I will take what you said into advice
-To start with :
The chords you used are not the right one. you have to swift them up.
This genre is not Dubstep my friend.
On 1:45 its more like the Genre: Goa.
But when the new part starts on 2:14 > Its not clear either... I Really see the potential to your music but the chords are not right./ & they are not Clear.
I Take a Gamble and say that you are producing with Ableton. if you play something in or use midi clips on the right notes. I think you have to start with that.
Anyways i see that you really try to build up a nice track. Now you only need the good sounds.
Go for it & Do your Best.!
Im using FL Studio
And your right dis aint dubstep :x I changed it
What do you mean by "the chords aren't right". Electronic music is a genre of music that basically the rules hardly apply, at least to me anyway.
I mean if I was writing music for an ochristra ensemble, then yeah It would be the most wise decision to make and polish the piece to the majority of the audience. Sense this is only really for me and like 60~ other people listing pleasures, I feel like I can mess around a bit!
I still will take your advice at its fullest, and I may change 2:14 a bit if I have the time. Cause I do agree that can be better!
Thanks for an honest and helpful review