You've got pretty nice theme and variation here and it was enjoyable. I would say that it is limited by only having one theme though, and I think if you expanded the song to have a secondary theme it would be quite enriching.
Keep it up!
P.S. Scouted you btw!
Tanks, I'm improving, but i use the free version of the program, so I'm limited, for the moment.
PS: Try to listen to the full history (starting from peacefull kingdom to fall of an hero)
Im working on anotter group of songs. Cya
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.