Being a song, I think it'd be better if it was longer and more varied. I feel this could fit better as a loop in its current state; other than that, it's a great start, but a start only.
So what would you say if I just added a small interlude to this track and brought back the first part? I could also incorporate a key change to change the new version from it's ~3 minutes to maybe 4 or 5, but I think 3 is more than good enough. But anyways, yeah. so I'm rendering a new version now :P should only take a 20 minutes
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