sry, but ive heard way too much techno. i think thats why hardly anybody reviews these tracks anymore. what u could try to do is be unique, try somthing that ppl dont usuallly do. its worth a shot. anyway, for a first, this isnt bad at all, keep at it.
i dont know how id try any thing new...unless....guitar riffs with a dance beat and synths hehehe
very well done!!!
i love this!!! for your first time it's really! really! really! great! my first one is really dum!
keep it up i can tell your ganna do lots of great pieces!
thank you well i hope others will like it too