should have added a little more staccato, for a change, in the first part... it's too steady, it needs a little more feeling... it's trippy though, and yeah, it kinda makes sense to me. then when it gets faster, it's beautiful
Something doesn't quite fit; the scale may not be the greatest, or maybe the chords don't go along well but I myself didn't like some parts of it. However, some parts were really enjoyable. What you could also variate with would be the key touch / note velocity.
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