I have to say personally, I love every bit of this. from the harmonica and the bass, it all just meshes together so lovely.
As a fellow double bassist, I really appreciate the live instruments you have here! This is a really cool piece, and you've got some neat things going on.
What I liked:
-The grungy texture is really great, and it captures that old dive bar kind of feel.
-Love the blues harp!
-The overall impression this gives is nice - very cool.
What could have been better:
-While the finger snaps are nice, I would really love to see some percussion in this, but I understand there can be limitations as far as instrumentation goes.
-You really should set this up as a loop instead of fading it out, I could see this working really well for some games.
-I get that this is the blues, but it is a bit repetitive. As a stand alone piece, it needs something else to give it a little more diversity.
This is a really great piece overall! I really like what you did here. I'd love to see you take these elements and craft them further. Take the style and run with it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.