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Aug 26, 2014 | 10:48 PM EDT
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10.9 MB
4 min 46 sec
3.86 / 5.00

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Rated 3.86 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

this is a WIP, couldn't fit it into the title.

comments are welcome and appreciated.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hey, adieuwinter! Nice track!

It's great that you're experimenting more with structuring your songs. Most people read reviews, go "OK", forget them, and continue on making their own stuff. Even if you aren't consciously doing it, I can tell that this song is much more structured than your NGAUC submission.

It's also great to hear you trying out new things in (I think) Logic. I noticed a tempo change at 2:39 that I've never heard you use before, and I think the pace slowed down for a breakdown is a great idea.

I can see the ska influence in the instrumentation and the trumpet melody. Genre combinations are always really interesting to listen to, since it's great to hear how different people try to mash stuff up in different ways. The thing is, one of the driving forces behind ska music is the focus on the downbeat - i.e., the 2 and 4 of every bar. Whereas the melodies were ska-esque, the background definitely wasn't, and I think if you wanted to bring out the ska more, you could've changed the drum beat.

Also, now that you're doing a good job with different Logic techniques, I think your next step is to try and use more humanization in your music. Editing the velocities of your instruments (especially drums in this case, since they're more realistic drums) gives them a bigger impact because you can make the instrument sound so much more dynamic.

Great work, and I hope you work on this until it's no longer a WIP!

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