Oh, this is like some dark lullaby. Very nice! Those are some sweet and complex bell and chime melodies. A little more variety would be nice--an additional instrument to fit onto it, and yes, dynamics. Soft strings in the background would make this even better. :)
Good advice, background instruments work well most of the time.
This piece and "In Between" have some dynamics already, I guess I was too conservative, and its hard to notice, time to run more tests on this. Thanks for your feedback.
It's very nice what you did for three minutes, with just two soundfonts.
Thanks, doing simple things works better for me.
Nice and dreamy. The melody is a little melancholic and has also a slightly classic touch. It´s also nice to have the melody below the arpeggios. You did really a lot of work in the melodic progression. But there is also some stuff which might improve this track a lot. The first thing is that you could give the track much more dynamic by velocity editing. Since you played every note is played with the same velocity the track is lacking a bit of dynamic. The other thing is that the quantisation you used is very rough, which makes this track a little mechanic. You can this feel especially during the end of the track. Anyway nice composition with a few production flaws. Keep up the nice composing!
Thanks for the good feedback man.
Dynamics are something I tend to neglect, I will give more attention to it.
Nicely Done. Seriously.
Glad You like it.
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