You really just tried to throw too many voice samples together at once, IMO. If they gave out points for adding vocal samples, you'd have the top submission of the month, I'm sure. You even did a decent job integrating them (considering how impossible that task is). You also waaay over used that 'gunshot' hit. Still, when you let the pad run with just one/two voice sample running or just had the piano playing, it was great. The first few minutes were just total cacophony, though. Last 2:30: 5/5. first 2:30 2/5, so you get 3.5 from me overall.