I can't believe you said that you weren't focusing as much on the melody! That melody at 1:20 is definitely one of the most beautiful I've heard in a while. Was it by any chance inspired by The Police (namely Every Breath You Take's outro)? Your other melodies are great as well.
The drums were nice, although they were mixed in a bit too loudly. Your hi-hats sound great, but your snare is a bit thin. The bass was great, though! I especially loved the bass work and effects in the ending. Normally, I dislike electric piano, but you made it sound so calming. Basically, great instrumentation, although your mixing could use a bit of work!
This has great atmosphere, instrumentation, and melodies. I loved it. Great job!
Thanks very much for the feedback! I would say i was thinking more Radiohead than the Police when playing around with the melody lol but i can hear some "Every breath" now that you mention it haha. Yeah i can use some more work with my mixing skills but practice makes perfect i guess, thanks again man. I'm glad you enjoyed the music.
Dreamy... Well done. I'll follow on SoundCloud just for support. I usually don't like it when drums close in on electronic music just because it's been done so many times, but you managed to pull it off in a different way. Kudos to you...
Thanks man, i appreciate it!
the way it jumps from the intro, and all the darker parts, to the more melodic parts, kinda chorus, sounds a little strange to me.
Love the Dark feeling to this song, Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.