Yeh I donno what to say. I guess keep up the work. Uh yeh like still fix some stuff. Get like maybe drums and guitar working at the same time with some keyboard. Like mix them in together playin at once, but dont make them overlap each other. Keep tryin =D Youll get the hang of it.
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You seemed to be a little bit eclectic/random when you made this. It wasn't very good in the sense that you didn't stick to one format. You went right from George Thorogood-like guitar into elevator music. So I say be a little bit more consistant. Also, the drums were always the same. I'd shake that up a bit. I hd no problems hearing the notes, so that was good clarity. I could hear a lot of repeats on drums and guitars and fx, so not to high on diversity or effort.