Damn.
You've got some pretty sick sampling. I love the intro sample, it's got a really unique progression and the lo-fi feel of everything meshes really well. The offtime drum hits around :30 and some other places are a sick touch, helps to slow down the feel of the track to a really laidback groove. The crackling stereo sound is a really nice effect, gives it almost like a old radio/old mic feel. Love the atmosphere you've created man.
The subbass hits you use hit a bit too hard compared to the rest of your track - it almost makes my headphones vibrate. Might want to tone that down. The use of the vocal scratches as a transition to the vox hook is pretty nice. I feel like if you brought out the scratches even more, and gave them a bit of a polish master-wise, it would give it a really nice black-to-white transition from lo-fi to hi-fi between sections.
The chord sample doesn't quite mesh too well with your vox hook. I would have tried something else - the dissonance isn't bad, but definitely could have been arranged better here. When you later the voice scratches with the vox hook in the section before 3:00, it's a pretty nice effect but I would have liked more variation in scratching and glitching - it gets a bit repetitive.
The sounds you use at 3:00 for the descending chord progression is a pretty abrupt change up. I like it. I'm getting a really strong Nujabes feel from your style of sampling. Keep it up man and you'll go places.
Now the reasons I didn't give it a 5: mixdown and original elements. I love sampling even though I don't use it, and Nujabes and Fat Jon etc etc are some of the best artists around (RIP Nujabes). Your mix, even if it's lo-fi, doesn't mean you skimp on EQing and balancing. You have to carefully consider how you want to contrast your original elements (the scratches?) with the lo-fi sampled elements, which you did a decent job at, but it wasn't at the point where I felt that jarring contrast that gives Nujabes-esque beats their out-of-time, chill laidback feel. Original elements: you know what I mean. You gotta have your own content in it, even if it's all samples manipulation. I'm not saying you didn't - but you sure didn't make it obvious. Try hard to incorporate your own production into your sample arrangement and manipulation and you'll have a much more unique product.
All in all, nice work. I really enjoyed it and I hope you keep it up. Good luck in the comp - you've got one of the most unique submissions along with the guy who submitted trap. :) Cheers!
7/10
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