Excellent
Voting 5 to get it more noticed, but if i were to vote without worrying about 0 voters, I'd give this 4. I mean c'mon, this song is good, but nothing's perfect ;)
I liked the beat and simplicity. Very... almost soothing. And I picture the same thing you do. Cool. Nice work. Check my stuff if you have the time. :)
-Nate