I like it. What VST did you use?
And percussion would help ya alot bud.
The melody and the synth remind me a bit of Zedd. I like it!
I would suggest you to take the first 8 bars of this melody since they are very catchy and create nice progressive house track with a soft intro and a slow build up, followed by a powerful chorus (or drop).
Also, work a bit on the synth, it sounds a bit too raw in my opinion. What synthesizer are you using for it? I'd recommend to add some decent white noise and play around with the filter cutoff freuency and the resonance until it sounds softer and brighter.
sounds like you bit off more than you could chew with the 3-part harmony. you have several distinct sections running back to back when really you could pick one part (the first eight bars are the best imo) and build a whole track around that.
if you need help with picking bass notes you can consult a trusty chord chart, since your "melody" is basically just a chord progression with a gate.
Yeah lol I intentionally tried to go for a longer melody than I've ever done before. I guess I'll keep experimenting with it and try a lot of things.
I had no trouble getting the bass melody down, it's just what I was trying to do with it the rhythm of it that was messing me up. Also I couldn't quite get the synth down. I did get the bass to sound decent though, but my main problem was getting the percussion down.