Yo this is awesome the all the instruments sound great but to me personally it sounds like you went too hard on the reverb and the placement of certain riffs sounds off. The placement of the riffs sounds off to me but the riffs themselves sound solid you should think about looking for a vocalist because this instrumental sounds great just needs a little bit of work.
Thanks man I really appreciate the feedback, yeah there was a verse where it sounds like the timeline dragged the riff back and threw it off in a spot or two and I actually am working with a vocalist for the next release, its going to be a concept album, stay tuned!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.