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New track! from Rymix! 2014!

Beat Producer: nietzlawe
Original Beat: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/573629

Track Name: Line up!
Lyrics: Rymix

This track was fun to drop. It's a rally for all of us underground artists/producers to take to the streets and fight the shitheads that are signed right now. It's about having a passion and not letting it go, no matter who or what tries to stop you.

"Those who say they can, and those who say they can't, are both usually right" ~Will Smith

Reviews


That piano and brass man. Good stuff.



A good piece of work. I particularly like the chorus, it's very catchy and fits well. The only improvement I would make to the chorus is the words Line Up. Maybe pronounce it a little more aggressively, like you are barking a command.

Most of the verses are pretty good, it's just the odd line that is a bit choppy flow-wise and could probably benefit from some extra syllables here and there to fill the spaces, rather than prolonging a pronunciation to fill the syllable space.

In terms of the beat I made, it has a distant feeling. I wish that I had better mixing skills to give the sound more presence. It feels like it is too far away.

I think the overall vibe of the song comes across pretty well, you have done a good job on it.


RemixF2D responds:

Yo nietzlawe, Great review. Thanks for the support and the collab. It was a fun track to work on and I kinda see what you mean by the lyrics, but I did write it all in about n hour or so and only tweaked a few things. Guess I was just vibin to the sound. ^_^

~Rymix


yo your lyrics are deep but theres some lines i dont understand but that may just be my fault like to me your lyrics feel like a poem, or a bunch of random thoughts i dunno about the beat but the hooks are solid. like maybe work on your flow a bit. The way it was recorded was well done to me. Generally this tracks good theres some things you need to work on. Im a rapper/producer as well if you ever want to collab hmu.


RemixF2D responds:

Hey thanks man, I appreciate the rep and honesty. Hit me up with a PM with a project you wanna do.

~Rymix


Really good track. Beat sounds a little too midi, but the lyrics go hard. Nice man.


RemixF2D responds:

Thanks man! Worked pretty hard on it. Just glad to be back

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RemixF2D
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Listens
691
Downloads
14
Votes
19
Score
4.58 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 13, 2014
9:22 PM EDT
Genre
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
Song
3 MB
3 min 18 sec
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.