I Say You Need Improvement
Keep workin on it... You need to learn alot more improvement needed. You need to learn to mix alot of instruments together. Are you using FL? Well w/e it is. Im sure theres alot more instruments in there. Try workin with a mixture of them.
Yes, I'm using Fruity Loops, and there is a lot of stuff available, and I'm still learning. I'll take your advice and mix a lot of instruments and whatnot together. Thank you.