I Like your work man , geuss im around the same level cause i can hear what you did =) ..
WWOOOOOWW > Didnt expect that ! >>> WHAT a Blast on 1:40 ! Sick Great + ( not my Lvl ;) !.

Critics

>Bl@ST THAT DRUMMMM :D ! ( in the start ) You repaird all after 1:40 Niceeee !
>Take a Break to let the listerner Breath ! ... W

Like your work ..

some parts were ok, but it kinda sounds empty and weak. get more movement into it, make it sound brighter, then it should be relatively okay.
what program are you using btw?