もしもし下衆野郎。haha, like the name, and the song :3
You've a got a surprisingly good concept of composition. I definitely think you should consider taking this a little more seriously, even if you're only somewhat interested in the subject of music production. There's definitely promise here.
Has a really moe and anime feel to it. Reminds me of work from 3R2, should give her a check sometime, she does a lot of anime remixes.
The one thing I think I would have changed up is the bass kick, it just seems a bit out of place. I think a heavier sounding kick would be more fitting here to be honest. Maybe noise filter it out a bit more too.
Overall, moshi moshi SpeedoSausage desu!
again im not really all that serious about music, i came up with a simple melody out of boredom and just used the most basic-ass built in VST's to finish it up. if i do make more music, i might actually put in the extra effort to not make it sound as yuck!
While i listened to this song i imagined a group of candies and sweet treats band playing the song. there was a swirly lolipop, popsicle, cupcake gum drop, candy bar, and a few others in the band. it starts in like a happy park setting they are doing a children's show but half way though it all changes and becomes very dark. The candy band that was now entertaining the children are now sacrificing them to some weird shrine and doing other morbid things. It was a song I will say that.
This is super cool haha you should keep on this path maybe try doing something and little lower in bpm but keep the same super happy vibe. Keep up the good work.
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