I like the progression and simplicity. That guitar at :36 sounds a little harsh, though. It also sounds a bit muddy with the strings in the background. Once you learn more about mixing and mastering, that'll be fixed. Try bringing out different pitches in some instruments more than others in the Parametric EQ (press F9 in FL Studio. Right click one of the inserts > link selected channels > to this track. An instrument should show up (it's highlighted in the Step Sequencer). Then, on the right-hand side of the window, click the drop-down arrow next to the numbered tabs, then click "Parametric EQ 2." You're welcome.) You should also get rid of all the tones below 200 hertz. If you have no idea what I'm talking about, just PM me, btw. Also, I think there were some slight balance issues. For example, I thought the beat at :55 was a little too loud, and overshadowed the rather impressive melodic content a bit. Overall, though, I'm extremely impressed with the structuring, transitions, and harmonies. The ending bothered me a bit, though - it just cut off so suddenly. I think it works very well as a loop, though. For your first time, this is a fantastic piece, though. Do you know how bad my first piece was?! Keep up the good work! :D
Hey man thanks for your rewiew ! I'm realy amazed how everyone is so positive in this community :D
Thank you for your advice about linkinkg channels and EQ2 it helped a lot already, tried to play with it and it sounds better indeed. I just have a slight problem since I use headphones, and believe those are not a real representation of how songs sound like through speakers. but hey payday is getting near xD
I am glad you liked it,constructively criticised,helped a lot and took time to write this reweiw.Hope I'll pass through the next round *fingers crossed* :D
Best regards from Croatia,
Pretty good! I'm a 5 year veteran of FL and i gotta say this is a pretty solid start! you want to remember to keep your instruments and percussions compressed and EQed and such but you probably have a long learning curve ahead before you really figure that out. Your melodics are solid tho! and your structure too. I dig it! If you could tell me what you think about my latest track "My World" that would be great!
Hey man! Thank you for your rewiew and advice :D And yes I am and absolute begginer in Fruity loops, downloaded it for the first time few days ago, i just watched ytb videos about FL basics and decided to give it a go. Didn't do any mastering at all just playing with volume so yeah it still needs a lot of work. I'm glad you liked and if you wanna do some kind of colaboration I would be more than glad to do it, if not well glad you liked my song anywas :) Thanks! Oh yeah writing you a rewiew, peace!