The clarity is the main problem with this piece. And the fact that you made this quickly doesn't help you. I'm sure that with a little extra time this could have been a great orchestral piece with violins and all.
Also, i think that this song should have been submitted in the classical section.
The piano was good but that's all that it was, a nice little piano melody.
Good luck with the contest.
lol ima submit a diffrent version of this dont worry lol
just fix up your clarity cuz it was terrible. the track over all had a good soft feel and it was worth a listen an intresting submission peace syntrus out