Hey, good job! I like this. :)
The start wasn't really scary, but unsettling (especially with the little noises here and there); that made for a good buildup to the more intense parts. Around 2:08, nice job on the strings setting the atmosphere and getting it pretty scary. I could see that as being the climatic part where she sees the bodies or whatever and the Ghost starts chasing her, but the rest of the song kinda sounds like it's a passive chasing (done really well, though). If the movie went silent after that except for this song and the visual, maybe in black and white, I think the song would be amazing; if you could hear her screaming and running, then maybe a crescendo would've worked better.
As it is, though, I like it and the song's better scenario works best, imo. Five stars well-earned. :D