It's pretty nice work, nothing to leap for joy about, but still pretty nice.
Orginality~You had some pretty creative tunes in there, but others sounded as though I had heard them somewhere before. 9/10
Clarity~I could everything that needed to heard perfectly. 10/10
Diversity~This is a pretty basic type of song, so nothing much here. 7/10
Effort~You at least put enough work on this to make it better then some of the stuff that gets on here. 8/10
Overall~A nice song, with a catchy beat and a definate beginning and end. 8.5/10 (rounded up to 9/10, rounded down to 4/5)
Crystall, thank you for the much needed feedback; I am trying to make a little deeper variance in my pieces from here on forward so they're less A...A'
The melodies sounded sweet, its kind of cool to hear melodies that you arent expecting. actually as this song progresses it gets pretty damn cool!!
it sounds like they would play in the background at some high-end euro bar.... If you can catch my drift! ;P
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Flashburn, ty for the compliments. Now I just need to get into high-end euro bar. ;) I will definitely check out your compositions
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.