Excessively repetitive. A single ~8s piano loop repeating for almost 3 minutes is not ideal I'm afraid. It sounded like the piano was supposed to be a backing track for the rest of the song, but it was louder than everything else.
In future I would recommend focusing more on variety. Ambient does not equal repetitive. Maybe try listening to some classical mixes for inspiration.
Thanks for the feedback. Ill definitely change it up next time.
i think its interesting that you put it in electronic when your first two instruments were classical instruments and your first electric instrument didnt come in until a minute but in the end the song still didnt have an electric turn. this is to repetitive for it to be relaxing also the piano is more activating then relaxing its quick and loud and has a big gap inbetween each segment. i will say that i liked the sound of it though. it was just very repetitive and i got board very quickly. the strings coming in were a nice touch but it wouldve been better with a touch of very low notes combined with the higher chords