so dope as f*ck I think I might just write lyrics to it
Not bad. :p
It's short, so I suppose it doesn't need too much of a melody to it. It's kind of the same thing looping over and over, with some variety in the background. It needs more, I think. But it sounds good.. Just might get old without more to it.
I like your percussion and drums a lot.
this is more old skool being redundent you know, more like for the old skool rappers. its possible to add more to it but it would be better with lyrics. i believe its a simple beat that gets the job done