This isn't bad at all. XD It's pretty groovy. It has a really slow beginning. You seem to have a bit of a problem with repetition at points in your songs so far.
It got cool again at 1:00. It's trippy sounding, it sounds almost like a drug trip in a way. But a good one. ^^
Your song sounds samey pretty much most of the song. It's also a bit too bitcrushed. Nothing completely stands out, everything is blended into the background. And the ending completely loses pretense of most melody. I didn't like the ending much.
Overall, pretty not bad. :p
yea i need to start working on variations having more drum patterns beeing different to give it that good feel to it, i honestly never made a song this slow so it was new battle grounds for me and i think that kinda make it lack in many places. still exploring new ground so its all come togther in one of these