Your songs are always very interesting in how you compose. I can definitely tell your'e trying to go against the bland uses of major scales and chords in most music. I do really like the feel you have going here, but I will say it feels more like a soundtrack piece. Sounding like a soundtrack isn't bad, but I guess it doesn't steal the attention as much as other songs.
But I still loved it lol.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.