In a game menu, the music has to introduce you to some sort of main theme or idea. This sounds like a substandard loop. Menu music in my opinion should be done almost last of all, and should be hard to produce. I feel no welcome from this song. I feel no emotion. What's the story? What's the idea?
yea i dont got much time but i read what u have to say let me see if i can change it up, thanks seprix!