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Jul 7, 2014 | 3:16 PM EDT
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7.1 MB
3 min 55 sec
4.26 / 5.00

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Rated 4.26 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

I spent a lot of time on this song and used so many patterns and instruments so I'm glad my computer didn't freeze while making the song this time. I think this song sounds slightly similar to my song, Dark Night, but I don't see that as a problem, lol.
Thank you for listening!

Update July 10, 2014: Since I am entering this song in the ngadm auditions, I made a lot of probably unnecessary changes to give the song more detail even though it was fine before.

Update August 4, 2014: I did not get past the audition stage. Thank you for all your reviews, downloads, and ratings!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great piano, great hihats. Though, the kick I can't hear very well. That's the only flaw. I am glad to see you improve on your compositions kills! :)

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

yeah shake yo booteh, great dance tune! i love that melody, great work.
- Pandasticality

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Rated 2 / 5 stars

The piano is good, serene, beautiful, and perhaps adds a little bit of difference to the stock i - VI - III - VII chord progression you have here. However, it felt forced, unvaried, a build on the same four chords. The melodies felt unnatural, in the sense that they were almost *expected* considering the chords and style of your piece. It felt very repetitive...

It didn't quite feel 'sacrificial'. I would have expected a piece bearing the title to be a bit more poignant, varied on chords, with a sound effect or two used subtly, thrown in for good measure. For instance, an axe. Or a flame. Or something along those lines.

Mixing, I have no complaints about, but this piece just strikes me as bland, I'm afraid...


BlueOceans responds:

Thank you for the review! You are right about the melodies, that is my biggest weakness. I am very impatient while making melodies and just leave it when I find something that sounds good. I am not a fan of those types of sound effects, I prefer sound effects that feel like they naturally belong in the song.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

It is okay, I am not so sure. I am very sorry it is not a 5-star.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Now that one is awesome. More interesting than most of what can be heard on most of the radios here, by the way. Even though the lead looks like a loop, it doesn't get boring, and it's also what makes the song marvelous. Keep going!

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