You didnt make this...
Umm, yes I did. I have total proof of ownership. I still have the FLP (Fruity Loops Project file). And if you think this was made by Vale Music, you would be correct. That is also me. I have put this song several places where you may have heard before. If you still think I am lying please message me why.
I like the synths and mood you established at the beginning. The groove at :31 was cool, and you definitely left a lot of room for climax. It flowed nicely, but I think you overused some of the transitions. Also, it's pretty minimalistic and repetitive. You need to harmonize more and vary your riffs more. Repeating the same riffs with different instruments does not count as variation. The beats and transitions are cool, but it needs some degree of verse-chorus sort of play-off. It also ends pretty suddenly. It has great potential with the mood and instruments and all, but you need to keep me entertained a little more. Start thinking about dynamic contrast and complex structural elements like breakdowns, bridges, etc. The mixing isn't bad, though. Also, I understand that you may not have intended for it to be very melodic, but, even so, it's more than worth it to harmonize a little more and add contrast with rhythms, dynamics, etc. Overall, it's a bit lack-luster, but with great potential. Keep up the good work, Mrobeymenow. ;)
Thanks for the help! I appreciate it. I'll definitely be using your advice with my next song. Thanks a ton!
Nice sounded like "Like a g6". you went a bit overboard with the melody tho and ended not that well.