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What's Coming to 'em

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[Audio Updated 8/10/14]

My latest work that will be featured on my upcoming album project. I hope you all enjoy it! If you can, leave a review, I'd love to know what you think! :)


Have you ever met a person who just
took too much and asked too much of you that

you just wanted to snap on and wanted to cut them off
but ya couldn't for a reason or another

until it got so bad, and you quit being yourself
forgetting what mattered most, started to become more

like them, less yourself,
like them, forgetting who you were

they'll get what's coming to them

I can't see myself when
You're drowning me in all your lies

I can't take anymore
This optimist has shut his door

Looking in the mirror hasn't been the same lately
Seeing more you, less me, this can't be healthy

but I'm Shedding my skin just to get rid of you
so long my dear...

I'm left tattered, these scars will never heal
I'm broken either way, just swallow the pain

like them, less yourself,
like them, less human

they'll get what's coming to them

I can't see myself when
You're drowning me in all your lies

I can't take anymore
this optimist has shut his door

I'm tired of trying with you
You've overstayed your welcome

Hypocrisy, Deception.
This optimist has shut his door


Genius and a masterpiece.

Spoonukem responds:

Thanks man! It means a lot to me! :)

Yeah man, I really liked everything. The vocals were pretty decent in this one. I really enjoyed them, although, I can't really identify much with the words, but that is just because I ignore people that try to fuck with who I am. lol....

Good song,


Spoonukem responds:

Appreciate the feedback, man! Yeah, the lyrics come from a younger perspective of myself, cleaning out the closet sort of lyrics, ya know? xP

I like the beat a lot, and the lyrics do strike a note with me.. but I needed the key to understand them, they were spoken indistinctly and mushily.

Spoonukem responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the track!

As far as the not being able to understand the lyrics issue, this may be corrected when I release the lossless audio format of the album via bandcamp, but I'll see if I can get to possibly correcting these issues for the mp3 before the album release.

Thanks again! :)

this is a great meaningful song. good job!

Spoonukem responds:

thank you! much appreciated! :)

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Credits & Info


4.55 / 5.00

Jul 1, 2014
1:44 AM EDT
File Info
9.3 MB
4 min 4 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.